Nov 6

Written by: ritzy | 183 Views | 5 comment(s) so far...
11/6/2008 10:14 AM 


WildernessIn times of tumult and strife
A voice comes from nowhere
"Hey Buddy, what are you doing in life?"
One simple question and the face becomes numb
Oh God! How I could be so dumb?
Never tired of earning money and fame
Playing endlessly the same old foolish game
Wandering aimlessly in a city that has no end
Without any sweetheart, without any friend
Standing at a point of no return and staring at the sky
Voices kept coming
"Give me a reason to smile, a reason to cry,
a reason to live, a reason to die"
In one moment, life lost all its savour
My heart was aching, so was the mind
With so many tears in my wistful eyes and afflicting pain in this little heart,
Perhaps I was heading towards
the most desolate patch of wilderness I could ever find
Everything was coming to an end
Without any sweetheart, without any friend

 

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Re: Wilderness

वाह क्या बात है? आजकल शेरो-शायरी पर उतर आए हैं जनाब | बहुत खूब |

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By सुबोध on   11/6/2008 11:56 AM

 

Re: Wilderness

try to write poems when happy,rontu poems likhna bandh kar do,its good,but makes one more serious in life

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By anshu on   11/6/2008 6:04 PM

 

Re: Wilderness

Well Anshu, you didnt read my other blog. "In the sweetness of sorrow, the soul finds the keenest delight". Anyways leave aside philosophy, I'm very happy in life and the aforemention poem just reflects state of mind at some point in time and lends a perspective, thats it.

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By Ritzy on   11/6/2008 6:07 PM

 

Re: Wilderness

rinku aap to bahut aachi poem likho

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By siddharth sethia on   1/1/2009 7:20 AM

 

Re: Wilderness

aillaaaaaaaaa.....kya baat hai...mar dala....
yaar bahut sahi likhi hain....ekdam dil se...

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By Piyush on   1/27/2009 12:02 PM

 





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